Friday, April 24, 2026

I Write - The House That Wakes Early

At our monthly Writing is Fun meetings we decide a prompt for writing for the next meeting. Length is set at 2 pages so we can read them at the meeting. There is quite a diversity of writing. Some are real life recollections, some fictional vignettes, and sometimes there's a poem. This is a combination of real life and a bit of made-up story.

The prompt for April 2026 was "House."


I Write: The House That Wakes Early

 

The birdhouse out front keeps its own time; time that runs on light instead of numbers. It’s a house that wakes before the earth turns to release the sun above South Mountain, long before I wake.

One morning, before “Betty Carol” tea consciousness, my athome workday started early. Working at home was never restful  - looking at the computer and rifling through files drained energy. I stumbled through dim rooms, goosebumps on my arms, following a cool breeze to the office. At the doorway I paused, still halfasleep. It was so quiet; and then I heard it.

 

ch REE   ch REE   ch REE 

 

Alone in a quiet pocket of the approaching day, the notes were loud, crisp, and as sweet as the taste of a fresh apple- repeating a call-and-response to itself.

 

ch REE   ch REE   ch REE 

 

A tiny bird perched on the birdhouse, singing into the pre-dawn, blue-grey light. Later I learned it was a Carolina Wrenmost likely a male, most certainly an early riser.

For a moment I imagined the birdhouse near my bedroom window. It would be the most pleasant way to start a day.

 

 

Spring arrived, and while working I began watching the house where he sang. It sits atop a wooden pole; a host of yellow daffodils huddled at its base. One day the wren pushed his head into the opening, tail cocked upright, inspecting. Soon he and a partner began to build a nest, carrying twigs, tufts of green moss, and thin strands of grass. Then, for days, it was still.

Another early morning workday I heard the song again. He sat perched on the tiny roof, flicking his tail as the song bounced into the dawn air.

 

ch REE   ch REE   ch REE 

 

I avoided my work, listening - ch REE  ch REE   ch REE  - and watching as the day opened gently – the dawning colors unfurling upward like opening flower petals- a faint blue to pale yellow, a small drift of pink and peach clouds, orange that burst into yellow as the sun crested the mountain. Then I started my workday.

 

As the day went on I saw the wren coming and going, carrying small morsels in its beak, wings fluttering as it dipped its head inside. A few days later both birds began to bring food back home.

 

After dinner, just before the earth turned to hide the sun behind Cove Mountain to the west, I walked through the gardens. As I slowly approached the birdhouse I could hear faint, breathy peeping — the tiny, uncertain voices of chicks only a day or two old. I knew the parents fed them from sunrise to sunset, but never after. Mama wren would fold her wings and settle in for the night, and Papa would settle in the maple branches nearby.

 

I had begun to rise early each morning to hear his morning song. The song seemed stronger, more confident, and definitely louder, singing out like he owns the yard.

 

ch REE   ch REE   ch REE 

 

  

During my workdays I would glance out the window and see nature’s other entertainment. Squirrels rushed around, tails flipping, digging in the garden bed. A chipmunk about to fill his cheeks with bird seed. Morning walkers and joggers out early and a neighbor walking her dog. Although the daffodils were gone they were replaced by bright orange tulips.

 

And there was a day when the commotion inside the nest was so loud I could hear it. A fluffy head peeked out of the birdhouse, ducked forward, and brought a little round body with caramel colored loose feathers up into the hole. It fell forward with small wings spread and landed softly. With a slight waddle it moved behind a line of hostas at the back of the garden. Three more fledglings followed it.

 

When I went for a fresh cup of tea, I noticed I was more relaxed than when my workday started later. By moving the birdhouse I would only gain a song—if I was awake for it. And I understood I would lose something quieter: the slow unfurling of the seasons as the earth tilts toward the sun. In Spring bringing up the daffodils and the wrens back to their little house just as surely as it turns to lift the sun over the mountain each morning.


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I Write - The House That Wakes Early

At our monthly Writing is Fun meetings we decide a prompt for writing for the next meeting. Length is set at 2 pages so we can read them at...